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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-05-03 01:18 AM



"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

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1 posted 2005-05-03 04:19 AM


A very unique subject...plastic with human emotions..an interseting metaphor...enjoyed..

Goldenrose.

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2 posted 2005-05-03 06:59 AM


I knew I'd like this
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3 posted 2005-06-17 09:09 AM


Oh yes they do.....

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4 posted 2005-06-18 06:10 PM


They do, indeed.

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5 posted 2005-06-18 06:28 PM


I very much liked this....

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6 posted 2005-06-20 12:01 PM


bump!
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7 posted 2005-06-20 10:45 AM


LadySnow~
Your poetic talent is so versatile and beautiful~

My heart tells me, that mannequins do cry ....
perhaps we just don't always know when they cry
or just what has caused the tears to flow~

*Mannequin Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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8 posted 2005-06-21 02:02 PM


Ohhhhh Snow, I like this one very much.  It may well be my fav of yours now.  Hugs gal.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

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9 posted 2005-06-21 02:32 PM


Cool!

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The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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