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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-05-02 11:13 AM



You erased me just like that
you never did care for me
no nothing like that.

You seem so honest sincere
I never seen through your
act when you were here. You
are a master of disqusie I'll give
ya that.

I can't belive I did see through you
but my cat did this is true. Everytime
you were over he always ended up biting
you.

People telling you I'm not good enough
that is rubish in more ways then one
I am the person that was your sun

I was there when you were sick
I would still be here even if
you feel into a deep dark hole
even when you grow old I'd still
be here

Pain in my heart, my soul is gone
I'd always be here to help you all day
long. Why must I be cursed with kindness
and a human soul why can't I be shallow
and be just as cold.

Your eyes how empty they were to me in the
car, you took my hand and shoved it far
words coming from your mouth like twisted
worms from the ground.

Every word stabbed into my heart, tears flowing
like the sea. how could you care one day then
go and throw this stuff at me.

Distraught is what I feel the dreams
touture me at nite for I see your face
there taunting and laughing at me


I wish I never ment you I say
you said Oh I don't regret it
I'm sure you had all the fun
you wanted anyway.

i know i got misspellings but i dident edit this yet im sorry for that

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-05-02 01:20 PM


It sounds as though you would be better off without him Julie.
Hang in there sweetie..things will get better.

(I smiled when I read your cat bit him)

Hugs, Nancy

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2005-05-02 04:23 PM


cats always know

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