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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-05-02 07:06 AM


I wonder at this moment
as you sleep
do you feel me
prying the boards off
of your private dreams

do my fingers touch sensitive
issue tissues
that you have clutched
between your arms
dolly's dolly safe

but I saw you write the words
on the little piece of mind
and tuck it under
who would ever look there
except someone like me

that likes the flavor of unsaid
when mixed with fragile
and you never did want a secret
you couldn't show and tell
to a perfect stranger

or at least an attentive one
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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-05-02 07:56 AM


You are fantabulous and in rare form this Morning!

Wonderful poetic thoughts

Morning and a very Happy beginning of the week sent your way.


Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-05-02 08:16 AM


A Monday morning smile maker for sure.
Good morning Dark.

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2005-05-02 10:46 AM


Mmmmmmm - Monday morning is always better with a cup of cocoa and a sip of dark - lovely to taste you hon -

  S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
4 posted 2005-05-02 10:51 AM



Are there perfect strangers?

Answer, please...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2005-05-02 04:35 PM


enjoyed
Indigo
Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602

6 posted 2005-05-03 11:33 AM


A perfect stranger,
like a perfect storm,
leaves you trembling,
gasping for breath
and sodden with
the wetness of their intensity.


Mmm.... woman overboard.

Indigo

Cloud 9
Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980
Ca
7 posted 2005-05-03 01:15 PM


"do my fingers touch sensitive
issue tissues
that you have clutched
between your arms
dolly's dolly safe"


I have issues with my tissue!! Can you help?



MGROVES
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Member Elite
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802
california
8 posted 2005-05-03 10:43 PM


got secrets?

  want secrets?
    tissue issues~only when i have none

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Beki
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
9 posted 2005-05-05 12:23 PM


you're right --- only you would look there LOL  love it!
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