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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2005-02-20 07:29 PM

Truths

Mirrors mirror faces all
And some refine sincerity
Yet, Snow White found herself so blue
Mirrors mirror faces all
Yet valiant was the man so true
Somewhere I’ll find the all of me
Mirrors mirror faces all
And some refine sincerity

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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1 posted 2005-02-20 07:42 PM

Sissie...

The mirror does not always tell the truth...but I see in yours much light and love, because the mirror I see you with, are my own eyes.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2005-02-20 07:58 PM

Loved this and loved what Martie said...
truth!

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

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Michigan, USA

3 posted 2005-02-20 08:28 PM

That's three in a row...
What Martie said. Love ya.
TD

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4 posted 2005-02-20 08:49 PM

Like the clarinet, Triolet is easy to play, but so very hard to play well....nicely done!

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passing shadows
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displaced

5 posted 2005-02-20 09:34 PM

love this

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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USA

6 posted 2005-02-21 07:28 PM

I think these are so hard to do. You did a good job, Sunshine lady.

....jo

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

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Oregon

7 posted 2005-02-21 11:49 PM

It looks like all the good praise is taken, but I'm glad you showed me how to write these. This is a beauty. Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

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Glen Hope, PA USA

8 posted 2005-02-22 02:32 PM

Your words reflect your beauty well

Susan
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walking the surreal

9 posted 2005-02-22 02:46 PM

Excellent -

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

JL
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since 2004-04-01

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Texas, USA

10 posted 2005-02-22 05:02 PM

Such excellence in poetry!!
Great write.

JL

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Deep in the heart

11 posted 2005-02-23 12:43 PM

The truth is ... you write beautifully!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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