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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-05-02 01:45 AM


If You Could Read My Mind

I understand now
why she wanted
to move on.
It was just like
in that song,
the feeling was gone,
and she just couldn't
get it back.
Back then,
I couldn't see
the answer so clearly,
but right now
it makes perfect
sense to me...

JamesLee
May01
2005
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Margherita
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1 posted 2005-05-02 05:39 AM

Sooner or later we understand.
You seem serene in this knowing, dear James.

Beautiful sharing.

Love, Margherita
passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-05-02 05:42 AM

nice
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2005-05-02 04:56 PM

Thank you Margherita and passing shadows for the nice responses...James
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