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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-05-01 08:16 AM

the curves of a long leg 192
were always more of a thrill
than donut holes on first sundays
even the sprinkle kind
could not arouse
as did those slow to 20's

we watched the trash trucks
play with paper bags
and wind children
I heard your fingers
on my leather
burrowing

or was it a puppy in blankets
looking for treats under
and panting from the exercise
but none the less
there were trees for shade
and hide behind in our minds

and we blushed then
how they loved our skin
against the rough of them
and the leaves that fell
onto their backs
to look up at us as gods

before me gave them new thunder
_____________

dark (scribblenote: outside santa barbara, 192 up to 154...around san marcos pass...in the wind wicked)

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-05-01 09:09 AM

enjoyed the ride...

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2005-05-01 04:04 PM

DS

It is my favorite way to get to where I'm going! Very colorful!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2005-05-02 10:48 AM

Love when the wind plays wicked and stirs up the words - was watching dust devils yesterday while driving across the desert/farm lands - it too stirred words - enjoyed this peek -

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-05-02 10:50 AM

yes...slow to 20, and relish the ride...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-05-02 04:41 PM

cool write

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2005-05-02 11:57 PM

oh yes!!!

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2005-05-03 06:55 AM

tremendous...love the word play and yet, precise imagry which you capture so well...
If one comes in hungry for poetry, you fill the reader to the brim. As my grand-daughter would say, "Full up to Here"....nice smooth trip you've taken me on...loved this

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

8 posted 2005-05-05 12:19 PM

awesome ride felt like i was there!

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