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Drama |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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From an air of friendliness drama sprouts from serene waters turbulence froths as if the planets have no further reckoning their orbits collide arguements fly off the cuff suspiscions bud at drama's root accusations launched... young minds undermine wiser consent.. Who externalizes a fault a blemish in accords a dump of caustic words inverted sentences, chosen words "less optimistic" rather than pessimistic thinking I'd shame success, yet so niave about life can't one just be realistic? from an air of friendliness one wants to receive help to learn more without the sense of urgency? that one can't stand the competition... or heated debate the kitchen gets hot with grief that drama boils in the kilns from serene waters where fair maidens bathe. |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Can't please everyone all the time, right? But, you have pleased me with this one! It was a fantastic write on a tricky subject. And, you hammered it into perfection! It flowed wonderfully and had some really dynamic imagery. It's great poetry. A thought-provoking, true-ringing keeper! Kevin |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sigh! the kitchen gets hot with grief A touching write, very well done. Love, Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
arguements fly off the cuff suspiscions bud at drama's root accusations launched... young minds undermine wiser consent.. yes I often wonder the whys of myself... M |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
why people like to be liked and work to be hated is a mystery to me... |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
why people like to be liked and work to be hated is a mystery to me... |
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