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Open Poetry #35

Light years away

Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2005-04-30 08:21 PM

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Light years away

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Lips touch
in unknown fervour,
worlds disappear

airborne
we drift through space,
sun facing sun

burning star core
light years away,
in this moment’s embrace.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

1 posted 2005-04-30 08:32 PM

very pretty! very!

how creative this is!

ice
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Pennsylvania

2 posted 2005-05-01 05:19 AM

M
This poem matches the warmth of the colors in the picture......nice choice of companions....

enjoyed
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Marge Tindal

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3 posted 2005-05-01 01:48 PM

Margherita~
The delicate beauty of this is not to be excelled by anything else I will read this day~
Absolutely stunning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

DavePage
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4 posted 2005-05-01 03:16 PM

Got it in one

Dave

Martie

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5 posted 2005-05-01 04:01 PM

Margherita

So much passion and beauty in this....loved it!

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

6 posted 2005-05-01 05:30 PM

worlds disappear

...in this moment’s embrace.

Beautiful work...love the picture too.
M

Ericc
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7 posted 2005-05-02 02:32 PM

Compressiing time with your words...beautiful Margherita.

Love,
Eric

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

8 posted 2005-05-02 04:11 PM

That is what I'd call an embrace out of this world!

Beautiful! ~ beautiful Margherita!

Love & Cosmic Light,
Linda

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

9 posted 2005-05-03 06:50 AM

Thank you all my dear poet friends for your loving comments.
Love, Margherita

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