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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2005-04-30 08:21 PM



  

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Light years away

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Lips touch
in unknown fervour,
worlds disappear

airborne
we drift through space,
sun facing sun

burning star core
light years away,
in this moment’s embrace.

© Copyright 2005 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-04-30 08:32 PM


very pretty! very!

how creative this is!

ice
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2 posted 2005-05-01 05:19 AM


M
This poem matches the warmth of the colors in the picture......nice choice of companions....
enjoyed
-----------ice
   ><>

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2005-05-01 01:48 PM


Margherita~
The delicate beauty of this is not to be excelled by anything else I will read this day~
Absolutely stunning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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DavePage
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4 posted 2005-05-01 03:16 PM


Got it in one

Dave

Martie
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5 posted 2005-05-01 04:01 PM


Margherita

So much passion and beauty in this....loved it!  

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2005-05-01 05:30 PM


worlds disappear

...in this moment’s embrace.

Beautiful work...love the picture too.
M

Ericc
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7 posted 2005-05-02 02:32 PM


Compressiing time with your words...beautiful Margherita.

Love,
Eric

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Realms of Light
8 posted 2005-05-02 04:11 PM


That is what I'd call an embrace out of this world!

Beautiful! ~ beautiful Margherita!

Love & Cosmic Light,
Linda

Margherita
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Eternity
9 posted 2005-05-03 06:50 AM


Thank you all my dear poet friends for your loving comments.
Love, Margherita

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