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Depth - Miond
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Depth - Miond She was shriven when first I saw her in my mind as she fought and scrapped and decided in her world that a world was a world and someone occassionally to settle down in and with and! Miond saw her first but she was always bringing something home whether I wanted it or not, on the doorstep usually where the world often meets what you dont expect and something like Miond decides or in Miond's world Rawand taunt escrim a mater Missure alog Escrim mater Dochen escrim nichted Ah behya Rawand taunt escrim a mater Or nauucht diem Telied Nauucht ah him Gedaffen Nichted moseer Miond the most learned of women with your paws you encapture living With your scent you know the world With your words the world unfurls What words could you write Without those paws and teeth In the night Who would ride upon your back In the safety they fear they lack Alas old friend and I age Whilst you remembered as a sage And grow ever younger day by day With wisdom attending Your every stay Of A deeper loss Until one day You my friend And I Will stray Deeper Growing blending throwing eons into answering the desire of loosing control Lush was the ideas springing planting seeds that bodies would fight in their dreams to take and their minds to fight She walked the magic physical bounded by other stone white rough hewn stretching firmly as her mind created the entrance She knew she brought destruction and her life would be to destroy Animals stalking were for others she stalked for need In a world she had never sought Deep The original words of the first ideas I left put below: Deep within her light brown eyes ran memories of earth grass mellowed lushness Tempered In her spirit rang acheons of restrain in her thoughts of light fighting restrain Answered In her upbringing she knew of her magic She knew large trees would grow animals stalking In a world In her mind she was entrapped by the chances of glory de-illusioned In her desires she spoke of that launch that would embed her in a cosy glory of self |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
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Sorry - I should have checked the spelling and grammar before I posted. Dave |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
I liked the way you went about this Dave. Interesting and enjoyable. wayne If nothing is something |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: The touch of mystery is fascinating in this write, dear Dave. You really go DEEP. Love, Margherita |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very deep m'friend  My spirit will rise |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks first and foremost for your words. Mioned was something that will become more but I didn't know where it was going or who or what it was I wrote ideas separately and Mioned has come together and not as four sets of poetical ideas but as it was in my head and it just needed time to think itself out. Thanks again Dave mysticpoe I liked the way you went about this Dave. Interesting and enjoyable. wayne Margherita With your scent you know the world With your words the world unfurls What words could you write Without those paws and teeth In the night The touch of mystery is fascinating in this write, dear Dave. You really go DEEP. Love, Margherita MGROVES very deep m'friend My spirit will rise above the sea~ There will be no drowning of my soul or me~ |
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