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DavePage
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0 posted 2005-04-30 04:04 PM


Depth - Miond

She was shriven when first I saw her in my mind as she fought and scrapped and decided in her world that a world was a world and someone occassionally to settle down in and with and!

Miond saw her first but she was always bringing something home whether I wanted it or not, on the doorstep usually where the world often meets what you dont expect and something like Miond decides
or in Miond's world

Rawand taunt escrim a mater
Missure alog
Escrim mater
Dochen escrim nichted
Ah behya
Rawand taunt escrim a mater
Or nauucht diem
Telied
Nauucht ah him
Gedaffen
Nichted moseer

Miond the most learned of women with your paws you encapture living
With your scent you know the world
With your words the world unfurls
What words could you write
Without those paws and teeth
In the night

Who would ride upon your back
In the safety they fear they lack
Alas old friend and I age
Whilst you remembered as a sage
And grow ever younger day by day
With wisdom attending
Your every stay
Of
A deeper loss
Until one day
You my friend
And I
Will stray

Deeper

Growing blending throwing eons into answering the desire of loosing control

Lush was the ideas springing planting seeds that bodies would fight in their dreams to take and their minds to fight

She walked the magic physical bounded by other stone white rough hewn stretching firmly as her mind created the entrance

She knew she brought destruction and her life would be to destroy

Animals stalking were for others she stalked for need

In a world she had never sought

Deep

The original words of the first ideas I left put below:

Deep within her light brown eyes ran memories of earth grass mellowed lushness

Tempered

In her spirit rang acheons of restrain in her thoughts of light fighting restrain

Answered

In her upbringing she knew of her magic
She knew large trees would grow animals stalking
In a world

In her mind she was entrapped by the chances of glory de-illusioned

In her desires she spoke of that launch that would embed her in a cosy glory of self


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DavePage
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1 posted 2005-04-30 04:21 PM


Sorry - I should have checked the spelling and grammar before I posted.

Dave

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2 posted 2005-04-30 07:09 PM


I liked the way you went about this Dave. Interesting and enjoyable.

wayne

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then everything is
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and all that exists.

Margherita
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3 posted 2005-04-30 08:40 PM


quote:
With your scent you know the world
With your words the world unfurls
What words could you write
Without those paws and teeth
In the night



The touch of mystery is fascinating in this write, dear Dave.

You really go DEEP.

Love, Margherita

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4 posted 2005-05-01 05:15 AM


very deep m'friend

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

DavePage
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5 posted 2005-05-02 04:28 PM


Thanks first and foremost for your words.

Mioned was something that will become more but I didn't know where it was going or who or what it was

I wrote ideas separately and Mioned has come together and not as four sets of poetical ideas but as it was in my head and it just needed time to think itself out.

Thanks again

Dave

mysticpoe

I liked the way you went about this Dave. Interesting and enjoyable.

wayne

Margherita

With your scent you know the world
With your words the world unfurls
What words could you write
Without those paws and teeth
In the night


The touch of mystery is fascinating in this write, dear Dave.

You really go DEEP.

Love, Margherita

MGROVES
                  
very deep m'friend
My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~




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