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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Lines Green blades damp beneath My toes, Earthworm bulges descrying Spring A break in gray, sunlight Streams Robin's eye upon a meal Scent of air inhaled to bone My pen has felt to write This day. There are things I cannot Change Truths faced real from inward Out As there are roads that call To me Me, eyeing all such things To be Each line is mine to think Upon My pen has felt to write This day. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
and I for one am glad of it! It's still a little cold here for burying my feet in the grass and sensing the new life underfoot, but there are hints of Spring all around, just for the looking. A pleasure to read! msicellanea |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
All your poems are worth reading between the lines as well. May your Spring be just around the corner, Dear Poetess. Love & Spring Light, Linda |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Karilea I have experienced so many days such as this. How well I can relate to your well written words. Take care.........Sue I am in motion |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
yes....indeed. hugging you, Chrislane  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a true gift when your pen does its magic |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"There are things I cannot Change Truths faced real from inward Out As there are roads that call To me Me, eyeing all such things To be Each line is mine to think Upon" Isn't that the way of it! Like the lines alot, Sunshine! Happy journey down those roads.  ....jo |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I sometimes feel like I have felt to write too....this day included. My felt is the surface I seem be consigned to though, here in the shade of this big black ball...... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Karilea, it is always a joy to read your poetry. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes it is always a pleasure to read your lines  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Each line is mine to think Upon My pen has felt to write This day." And a great write it is too... JL |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
If I may read between the lines ... Beautiful! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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