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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
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Floating gently on a cloud....

0 posted 2005-04-28 04:28 PM



You have become a stranger to me,
Long long ago and far away
In the land of happy ever after
The dream is gently floating.
No more words, no more smiles,
Days to weeks to months,
Time slips by silently.
Yet ever my beloved will you be,
Though life goes on and love
Visits again; for there is a love that
Comes only once in a lifetime.
It is enough for my heart to have
Known you, to have been held
By your gentleness and strength.
I have my memories, stardust
Swirling through my soul.
I have my memories, all that is left
Of my fairytale, the dream that
Didn’t come true, consumed by the
Nothing, on its travels through time.
I am happy to have known you.
I walk on, not looking back,
Seizing all the joys as they
Visit me in my journeying.
I do not look backward but
I remember everything and
As long as I remember, there
You are, with me, always with me.

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

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Evi
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since 2004-04-10
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1 posted 2005-05-01 02:23 PM


Loved it!

Will ponder more before commenting

Keep it up

xx

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
2 posted 2005-05-02 11:37 AM


beautiful memories , yes it amazing how those special ones remain forever etched  in our mind

Hope

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2005-05-02 04:29 PM


I knew from the first line that I would love this one

well done!

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
4 posted 2005-06-19 02:35 AM


Wow...this reminds me of someone very special to me.  

This brought tears to my eyes!!!!

It's a keeper!!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink


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