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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2005-04-28 02:36 AM



"It knocks at the door
that one creates
It enters ones dream window
that one stakes",

"Riddler
why torment me so,
can't you tell me
what my future will be?

"It knocks a nail in a coffin
if life has expired
it enters air passages
once a cycle is wired".

"Tormenter
why riddle me with life evanescent
why not paint rainbows
with brush stroke transparance?


" Life would be too easy to live
if a knock came to the door
with nothing there to give"...
but given a chance to succeed
in the wake of an unwitting deed
Opportunites lie behind the knock
for what's in store
if one takes stock"...



[This message has been edited by ecrivan (04-29-2005 01:21 AM).]

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-04-28 07:21 AM


indeed Martin!
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