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The Wind Remembers -- (Inspired by Ratleader)
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The Wind Remembers -- (Inspired by Ratleader) |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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~~ When darkness settles and the wind remembers: naked and standing alone your hands, fractal tracings along crimson pages of winter wood a hollowed soul, a metaphor for cradled love for long nights in harvest of heart has he ever wondered why I stand quietly? preaching to a mirrored reflection give back my youth and younger stones, in a room of stars and wind that I may be-- if I love, consider this to be from my own mouth if I want-- do not blame it is the art I never figured in -- I do not remember the call of sign like rain or ash I do not mention his name though his wind blows through me and you: a place among my spiritual being the image clear we are not doves within his beauty we never touch ~~~~~~ thank you to Ratleader for such inspiration..... ~~*~~ I'm Standing on a bridge I'm waitin in the dark I thought that you'd be here by now Theres nothing but the rain ~~**~~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
and I am thanking Ed too, for this inspire is absolutely gorgeous! words from another realm, floating upon a spring breeze |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"your hands, fractal tracings along crimson pages of winter wood a hollowed soul, a metaphor for cradled love" liquid gold... that's what I'm talking about, ethereal |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This is my 5,000th post....and the calendar just turned over to my birthday. I had been hoping to find a truly exquisite poem to mark it....and I just did. You humble me. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So lovely, Lauren...thank you Ed for your inspire!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just wonderful! and Ed, congrats on your 5000th!  God only promises a safe landing, not a calm flight. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh I am so very glad he inspired you to write such beauty Lauren.... this m'love is a  I really want to care, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
My God Lauren, this was profound writing girl... Excellent! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
if I love, consider this to be from my own mouth if I want-- do not blame it is the art I never figured in -- This is exquisite work... you couldn't find better inspiration. *S* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is what comes when sharing emotions and twists of life... You did a wonderful job with a bit of inspire, Lauren... and Ed? That's what you get for being so deep...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When darkness settles and the wind remembers: naked and standing alone your hands, fractal tracings along crimson pages of winter wood a hollowed soul, a metaphor for cradled love for long nights in harvest of heart has he ever wondered why I stand quietly? preaching to a mirrored reflection give back my youth and younger stones, in a room of stars and wind that I may be-- if I love, consider this to be from my own mouth if I want-- do not blame it is the art I never figured in -- I do not remember the call of sign like rain or ash I do not mention his name though his wind blows through me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ once again your words haunt me in such a lovely fashion....beautiful tracings poetess L...I do so love the touch of your verse. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Sheer excellence.....sheer everything! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I thank you each for stopping by and letting me know you were here, to read, respond and take this in....  ED, you pulled my muse outta of a slump, I am thankful....  hugsss and love to all Lauren~ I don’t mind spending everyday Out on your corner in the pouring rain Look for the girl with the broken smile Ask her if she wants to stay awhile |
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