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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-04-27 05:12 PM

So shyly
Under the late autumn moon
We’ll take center stage
Together walk upon the floor

Hand in hand
Move as we had before
With others in better years

And just perhaps
If we do it well
Some cherub’s lips will smile

While we become
Just once more young again

Who knows what may happen then

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-04-27 05:17 PM

B E A U T I F U L !!
Very very much enjoyed this piece John!
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-04-27 05:24 PM

The world will more than

As stone

Dave

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

3 posted 2005-04-27 11:35 PM

A small smile creeps my lips. I loved this poem...as I do all of your works. You are nothing short of brilliant.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-04-28 09:03 AM

hope, and the excitement of encouragement...

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

5 posted 2005-04-28 09:47 AM

Thanks all.

Please, if you get the opportunity, listen
to Aaron Copland’s “Saturday Night Waltz”
from “Rodeo”.

Thanks again.

John

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2005-04-28 01:40 PM

While we become
Just once more young again

Who knows what may happen then

Who knows... indeed. *S* Miracles aren't exclusive property of the young in years. *S* Beautiful!!!

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

7 posted 2005-04-28 01:50 PM

Amazing. You are a poet's real inspiraition my friend. I loved every bit of this poem. As you can see...I had to respond twice, for I am in this mine shaft of a high school and I needed your poem to bring me back to my earth. Thank you.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2005-04-30 10:29 AM

Yes....that's the word, just yes. Perhaps then, perhaps it will.

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Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

9 posted 2007-04-30 03:41 PM

it is soooooo nice to read something like this from you. so very good and alive.

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