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a man within his art
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a man within his art |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
there is a place. it is not here. Like an old man in the middle of his art he walked. He found the most unlikely places. I could only think how I like your morning conversations. he seemed a bit lost. I told him who I was and his mouth became a little crocked. but I didn't want to fix it. He picked bugs out of the air and off my shirt. He said I could go barefoot and I told him that was more my type of thing. I twirl better here. even the cemeteries looked pretty and I wasn't even sad. Though the stone be cold the house is white, and the floor boards creek with life. We say things to convey were not from around here. but what could they know. and what could we possibly say. in a moment so lush, in a dress so old. in a smile so off. I like how your shirt wrinkles, and your nose. I don't even wish to straighten your misshappened view on me. [This message has been edited by Lexy (04-27-2005 07:15 PM).] |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I think this brilliant and the wash does happen and the shirt was bought wrinkled and the nose does twitch and the picture is great dave |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What an intriguing read! I could feel the apparitions as they danced about your words. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
how did we pass over this, well, I'm so happy I caught it, what a read....sending you right back up to the top, this deseverves more reading and commenting...one for the Giffer!!! Truely enjoyed! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh, I am glad this came back up. I'm with Kacy, the images are brilliant in this. Well done. I really want to care, |
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