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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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we had tropical fish once in a tank by the television on a cast iron stand they swam around and around they got fat and blew bubbles into the blinds until, one by one they drowned yup drowned grin they looked great there beneath the fluorescent under the water spitting chips and swishing their tales as we held ours p.s sorry for this, was feeling rather glum "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" Michael Hutchence (INXS) [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (04-26-2005 08:38 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree Awww, poor little fishies! You must become unglum, you hear! Maybe a hug will help?  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
M'dear Martie, hugs will most definitely help  thank you ma'am  "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
well if hugs will help m'sweet Maree, heres a heartload full of em for ya..  I really want to care, |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I wonder sometimes if you were driving a checker on the wrong side of the car and the road would I want you hatless enjoyed this ms maree |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
O Gentle one, the more the better Thank you sweetheart Mr D? I don't know...would you? i'm waiting. lol Thank you for popping in Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
guess you've gotta change the water sometimes, and come up for a bubble of fresh air  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i watched one die one day while i had a pedicure in a tank, where no one but me cried for him, not even his mother knew he hit his head against a giant rock in the tank...... cry angel cry............for them they know |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Geez Maree! You know I love your writing, but come on! You can't go giving the great-white-hunter a lump in his throat over a fish! You know you must be good if you can choke me up with a fish story! It really was a brilliantly written poem as always. It's a blessing to find your posts whenever I get on the blue pages. I hope you are feeling better. Be "un-glum!" Warm wishes from afar, Big K |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Well, Darksis That aquarium would make a dandy terrarium. (And ya wouldn't need to scrape algae from the glass.) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understanding here I watch my fish too |
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