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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2005-04-26 10:29 AM

Alluring she is
with voice of tranquil,
such soothing
gently rocking
in melodic sway,

   she slowly rolls
     into my soul

It is her grace
   that captivates

my gaze

turned
in appreciation
of the most beautiful
vision
I have ever seen...

only she
     can bring me
               to my knees.

I would linger there
in her serene embrace
to memorize
her scent,
      her touch
            her spirit
                   her sound...

Alone,
within her
I am found

she compliments
my completeness

Holding my dreams
she tastes my tears
softly she whispers

   those whispers
that calm my fears

her siren song
she sings to me
leaving me      ever longing
for her seas.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2005-04-26 10:33 AM

Oh my - this is beautiful in its longing and eloquence - you do magic my friend -

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2005-04-26 10:51 AM

I would linger here
in her serene embrace
to memorize
her scent,
      her touch
            her spirit
                   her sound...

Alone,
within her
I am found
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

you know I right there with ya...
there is nothing that can effect me more than the tides...
I miss the ocean like I miss breathing...
beautiful devotion of words poetess Donna.
You captured the allure and serene in your lovely verse.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-04-26 11:07 AM

B E A U T I F U L !!!!

Wonderful write filled with genuine passion.
~Hugs~Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2005-04-26 11:25 AM

Thank you all my friends, and Janet, thank you for the beautiful inspire through your fantastic photography skills. Absolutely lovely!

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2005-04-26 12:38 PM

Donna, its been a pretty crappy day, more so now, since I snapped and unloaded on a friend...and then I came upon this, your words are so full of promise...to me, and for me, the ocean is life...and you've captured it incredibly, thank you...hugs

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

6 posted 2005-04-26 12:53 PM

If a note or a glimpse
Beauty can be entrancing
You touch the senses here
Well done

Gloom

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2005-04-26 05:54 PM

Wow Donna, you do the ocean proud, i'm looking out my window now and I see it, swelling and beaming with pride.

truly a beautiful piece m'gentle one.

it's a

Mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2005-04-26 06:08 PM

Thank you each, so very much..

now damn Maree, pass the tissues...
you went and made me misty...

your words touch.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

9 posted 2005-04-26 06:18 PM

beautiful....eloquent and beautiful

sigh

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2005-04-26 07:52 PM

good read

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

11 posted 2005-04-27 11:53 AM

JB, and Vandana, thank you both ladies.

I appreciate you all!!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2005-04-28 11:17 AM

GentlestSpiritGal~
You pen such beautifully wistful thoughts~
Just LOVELY~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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