Open Poetry #35 |
A rainbow Kissed Sky |
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
rainbows kiss the sky after clouded eyes shed tears of cleansing letting go of pent up fears of gray cloaked days and fog laden nights veiled in the shrouded mist of the uncertain see now the sun! its ray gleam shimmer igniting hues of red yellow green promising the bright of the morrow moment arched in the light of a rainbow kissed sky s.a.t. If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
very beautiful vision bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
a cloud in a corner of the sky glorified by the dawn. -majnu |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Love this Susan. A great read for me at 3 am. Bravo! Bravo! Bravo! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Can see it rising high within my mind..the image is alive and shining colours vibrant..thank you Susan.. Goldenrose. Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
your a name in your own time, which is yours...be happy Suz...go for the gusto This was simply awesome |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
promising the bright of the morrow moment arched in the light of a rainbow kissed sky Absolutely beautiful. It holds hope. Love, Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely writing Susan... rain is in the forecast, maybe a rainbow will fill the skies *s M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very lovely Susan..very tranquil. Hugs and have a great day! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
so very peaceful and beautiful Susan. Hugs! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
You are all most kind my friends - thank you for the gift of your hearts and your eyes - Love S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I'm sorry you stopped writing, Susan Dave |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Dave - i've not stopped - just slowed way down as the world around me has once again demanded my attention - not as much time to come and play - wish it weren't so - and yet, many good things going on so s'okay in that regards - V - thank you my friend Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Simply a beautiful picture, thank you for sharing. Brian Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
soothsin, this is a place one could get lost in as others we might speak of enjoyed it lady love |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A lovely place for a pretty woman... when life gets in the way? Eat Skittles. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you Brian D - to be lost with you would be to be found Sunshine - you brighten my day and smile me- thank you my friend Hugs - S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Wonderful read. :-) <^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world |
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