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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Stars tickled the willows as frogs chorused a lazy crescent moon swaying over cold waters. The sound of rubbing wood as an oar swirled against the current’s flow... A beat of heart against the breast, a lingering sigh that brushes lips. A tracing flow of silken dressed and shivering soft shaking hips. IF once to wade the waters upon the warming flow, to streak the walking ripples as only two loves know. Rise to me my wanted dream, bring the gleam of passion’s eye. Sip the glass of cooling cream...await the owl’s first soaring fly. And whence the branch does feel the claw of nature’s feathered friend....a crow shall once softly caw in wait the river’s bend. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
vivid write, as always a magnificent sight to behold, the owl in flight, yes |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmmm - Barry - you do write so lovely-  SIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
All of nature ~ natural ~ in play. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry I gotcha, well done, enjoyed |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
http://www.poemhunter.com/p/m/poem.asp?poet=13083&poem=180552 You might like this . . . |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I am glad I dropped in to read this wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Barry, you never cease to reach into the depths of my inner core with your evocative, yet delicately written, poems of love... They stir, Sir!  EA |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
I can always visualize the scenes you paint with your words so easily. A rare talent. Eric |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
BJ, you blow me away sometimes!! This is ummm-ummmm good! ....jo |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Beautiful write! ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Anyone who can reach the depths of Earth Angel's inner core is aces with me!  You done good, Barry. You mix in a very nice blend of nature and human feelings to produce a nice piece of writing  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Love the sweet flow, ebb and ripple of this one. Lovely, descriptive writing and the musical quality of the language is enchanting. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
enjoyed this dip within your thoughts my friend .... refreshing! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
wow love it |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have a quite special connection to Nature and when you weave love within, the results are just perfect. Beautiful, very beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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