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Open Poetry #35

Four AM

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2005-04-25 01:11 PM

Watching her
As she glides through the moonlight,
Wishing for,
Lusting for,
Knowing these feelings aren't right,
Still blood rush
With this lust
I can barely control me,
Without sound
In nightgown
So silent is her beauty,
Watching her
Disappearing in the night.

Gloom

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

1 posted 2005-04-25 01:40 PM

I like this...

adagio
Member

since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

2 posted 2005-04-25 03:39 PM

Very nice piece

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-04-25 06:07 PM

dreaming?

4am is really too early to be awake

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2005-04-25 06:47 PM

Lovely...James

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2005-04-25 07:14 PM

Oooh.....very nice! hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

stevebrklynnyc
Member

since 2004-01-04

Posts 292
GA, Camden

6 posted 2005-04-25 07:34 PM

Why be silent? Just a thought, and by the way, nice imagery!!!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2005-04-25 09:18 PM

nice full moon write
LOL

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2005-04-26 07:24 AM

well, nice to see you, and very alert at that...wonderful write! Thank you for sharing.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

9 posted 2005-04-26 07:48 AM

Not so gloomy, dear sir...

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

10 posted 2005-04-26 12:49 PM

Thank you, All
for the Kindness of response

Gloom

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