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Open Poetry #35

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~Willow~
New Member

since 2002-08-10

Posts 9

0 posted 2005-04-25 10:59 AM

come, my love
shelter beneath me
eyes closed in whispers
I shall sing songs to shame
sirens & stir souls into longing
shelter here beneath this shade
fill upon ripened fruit 'til replete
lay down roots within rich soil
stay 'til dawn or even forever
I am yours now and then
then and now
I am
your
shade
anchor
here...

~Willow~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-04-25 12:07 PM

Willow~This is breathtaking!
Both in words and presentation.
Into my library with this keeper.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

2 posted 2005-04-25 12:36 PM

~Willow~

Your poem is a treat in every way! It has such lovely words, meaning, and form. A real pleasure to read!

~misce

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2005-04-25 02:28 PM

Talent

Dave

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-04-25 02:53 PM

Lovely, Willow.
Thank you for sharing.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-04-25 06:10 PM

stunning!

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