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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-04-25 07:56 AM



tavern of ghostriders
where leather dances with silver
leaning women are olde worlde
but wear young skin bosoms

and the blue water has hands
that knows the moon ball
how the round is warm
when the palms are empty

there are no sleeves
on the arms of the spirits
their bones are bare
but still they do not shiver

stone mouths have spoken
when the stallions galloped
they made echo music
and the riders were many

for the reapers beguile


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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2005-04-25 08:00 AM


if the weather ever makes up its mind...I will travel some back roads and let my eyes flow the mind. ( but I don't think the scenery is as wonderful here as there)


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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-04-25 08:36 AM


and the blue water has hands
that knows the moon ball
how the round is warm
when the palms are empty

lovely!

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
3 posted 2005-04-25 10:43 AM


DS

"there are no sleeves
on the arms of the spirits
their bones are bare
but still they do not shiver"

Only you could know and express it this way.  

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2005-04-25 03:32 PM


I can feel the room, the ghosts moving about in their skin - will bring my bolo (wink)

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Ratleader
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5 posted 2005-04-27 10:10 AM


Longknife friendly....and you should bring one, I assume....

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
6 posted 2005-04-27 12:35 PM


cool write
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2005-04-27 01:32 PM


there are no sleeves
on the arms of the spirits

~*~

No sleeves - but perhaps
a bit of Spanish moss...

for that is what I felt
as I ducked underneath
the waterfall of these wonderful lines...

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