Open Poetry #35 |
Come Passion |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Imagining once How it was beautiful— In morning light The broken vase |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you touch the mind with so few words~~ M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful indeed |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This exquisite piece....written two days ago and it has only two replies..... .....thinking of that leaves me ashamed of this group. You've said more in twelve words, shown more of what it is to live, than some of us -- myself included -- often say in twelve verses. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So much truth in these words! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WONDERFUL!! You express so much in so few words. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Broken as do the pieces Of my Inner anticipation of the Soul's rapture I feel your emptiness within Evenescent shafts of my Ragged mind Free me from your Tortoure of Glass and Propane As always it is more than a pleasure to read your work that leaves so much to the mind. Loved it. Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this gives so much meaning, as your poems always do, they are sensuous...delightful and embracing...thank you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I wish I could say as much in paragraphs as you manage in just a few words... This is very much appreciated. *S* |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
the peace. |
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