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In the East the Daystar doth rise this Morn
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In the East the Daystar doth rise this Morn |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279
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In the East the Daystar doth rise this Morn In the East the daystar doth rise this morn, It hues’ the skies in cerulean and rose, How sweetly it seem the colors adorn— —The clouds mid the Heavens which bequeathed these throes. I woke this forenoon and sprung from my bed, So that I might share this sunup with she, Yet I wonder if she sees’ dawn-tinted red, In the firmament God gifted too me. O’ longing, sweet ache, I hunger for her kiss, Yet ‘tis pastel sunup’s I’m to be ceded, Certainly there’s naught that aches quite like this— —Looks as if my prayers remain unheeded. Still we’re bequeathed this cockcrow and our love, And that dearest we’ll ne'er be deprived of. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a longing but still enough to hold you over I imagine she sees it too |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
EvocativeVerse2 Look beneath the willows bow And there you will find your frau. Enjoyed |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Those things that bond us to another are larger than the contents of a single heart. Read this several times Kevin, each with a deeper meaning. Great write. TD |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Kevin - your pen drips the soft romanticism of ages past and stirs the breath with its beauty - and when you use color in the manner you do, I melt - lovely-  SIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
If ye were to bestow thy gracious words upon this maiden, thy prayers wouldst most surely be answered by sunrise next. Love & Light, EA |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
EV2, Oh, what a poet and artist are you! How can she help but see the colors of the sky if not only through the reflection of your eyes? Yes, this is a must read. I've read it several times and each time, I see more. Think I'll save it in the library! Thanks. miscellanea |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kevin, oh, that you are blessed to see the sunrise! What a beautiful piece of poetry this is and I hope the one your heart yearns for is reading.  ....jo |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Delcious read. I love this whole piece. ;-) Amour Vous Within this heart you'll find love |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
The colors of the sky are beautiful to the naked eye~ My naked eyes are covered by a blinding light that shinneth forth unto the widows of my soul~ What a lovely light to be blinded by  We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
what a way to wake up (with this to read)... what ? that doesn't clarify just how much i love your words? *smirk* silly me. ::: leans in close ::: this reminds me of the book i bought a few days ago filled with... love letters/poetry. and i'm going to print this to put it between the pages of that book, because it belongs beneath the cover of such a book. love, S~ "i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly" |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This needs a bump....beautiful words...thanks for the email and the compliment...made me blush! ~Love and hugs ~ARh We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Just needed that certain touch ;-) hugs amour Vous, Within this heart you'll find love |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
lucky lady to receive whispers from such a romantic heart~ |
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