Open Poetry #35 |
I Weigh |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
I Weigh I weigh my echoes ounce by ounce Listened to them bounce by bounce Determining the coming spring The snow that stayed in lingering And in the idles of the wile I placed a little peppers guile I said I’d chase the honey bee And add a little to my tea I’d lift the curtains of bizarre And sift the certain comes by star I’d open up Pandora’s Box And play the sly and cunning fox I’m looking forward to this spring To taste this taste of seasoning To place aside the mundane day And pick the daisies by the way She loves me, she loves me not The soup boils and the fires hot |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
An enthusiastic write. Here's to many more Springs. Enjoyed |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Seymour, through your beautiful words Spring takes a leap into our hearts! Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've got to watch Pandora's box sometimes I think it needs a lock! Good morning, Sy! I've got to play catch-up and go back a few days to gather your gems... I've been a little busy! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Good grief you have nice weather there all the time, think about me up here in the pouring rain, and that will cheer you up. I loved the last line Sy, why is it I am attaching that to your other half. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well Sy, now I know you like honey in your tea! Hopefully I will remember that.. I know I will remember this wonderful post! ~Afternoon smiles & hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can't wait for Spring either Sy I've had quite enough of this cold weather |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy....sure sounds good to me! |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I like this well crafted poem, and I like the imagery too; and here's to many more Springs! |
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