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Open Poetry #35

Words - having had it deleted once it stays in the original

DavePage
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0 posted 2005-02-20 12:23 PM

It originates from someone who I do believe in her statement that she was a "sex slave".

Yes, if you are not yawning, it is an original set of words.

It was from a wide open Net and I prefer reality in real life - it is more fun and more challenging.

This is the background to it from a long time ago.

I logged onto a Palace site last night
And found myself having a brief few words with a girl
Now under court protection
Who had been sold for most of her life.
For those who don't believe in slavery's existent

Dave

Sing of everlasting hope
A joke you bring to me
Sing of your face
Tell me go
What do you think of me
You think that I don't even feel
A single word you say
It's only lies
And lies are all I have
To take your love away
Talk of everlasting words
You have nothing for me
Smile on your ego please
I need to see the back of these
Open the door
Then go and score
I need no tally for thee
I am laid on the floor
Just like a cheap kept whore
You body easily
You think that I dont even mean a single word I say
It's only words
And words are I have
To take the dread away
Go away from me
Fly on your high from me
For that brings such joy to me
Go and find your sty
For you are a pig to me
You think that I can love you
For the words you say
Above you
It's only words
And words are all I have to take the smell away
Not me of course.

I logged onto a Palace site last night
And found myself having a brief few words with a girl
Now under court protection
Who had been sold for most of her life.
For those who don't believe in slavery's existent

passing shadows
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displaced

1 posted 2005-02-20 10:02 AM

I couldn't imagine that

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

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california

2 posted 2005-02-21 05:35 AM

good one, oh i believe it exsists!

Balladeer

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3 posted 2005-02-22 12:54 PM

Interesting, Dave. One of my favorite songs by the BeeGees has the same title as your poem. Actually some of the lyrics bear a striking resemblance to your words...for example:

BeeGees:
"You think that I don't even mean a single word I say.
It's only words, and words are all I have, to take your heart away."

Yours:
"You think that I don't even feel A single word you say
It's only lies And lies are all I have To take your love away "

Perhaps you unconsciously had that song floating around in your mind when you created your poem....either that or you are being posessed by the spirit of Barry Gibb!

Take two aspirin for that Saturday Night Fever and call me in the morning

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