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On that first day
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On that first day |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
We took rhythms stones looks curtseys backward looks echoed in black of eyes and hair and grit and sand and being silly and provocative in knowing each caught well maybe it was a bit early on caught or so I thought and maybe it was a bit later on caught or so she though We ploughed through life never talking of the first days or day We took life and when life went away we had lived On that first day |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
That was beautiful. How masterful you are of the language. Loved it lots. Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
you are brilliant~ My spirit will rise |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely done |
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