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yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

0 posted 2005-04-20 12:11 PM

I love the way you love me
The way your loving hands caress my soul
Every little thing you say makes me lose control
And I want your lips entangled within mine

But when your eyes looked into me
The warmth within them set me free
And I told myself I would never love again

Hold me now and forever
In the comfort of your arms
‘Cause I yearn for the love you’ll make to me

I’m so gone

Caught up in the rapture of you
Your eyes are saying that you want me too
So for you
I’ll hold it back
And let your love shine through
I’m caught up in the rapture of you

I need you in my arms at night
I need the love of someone like you
To keep away the pain
Of all the rainy days

I’m lost without you
In a way that almost nobody knows
I keep my secrets from you
But I suppose
You already knew
My truest of true
Feelings for you

But when you turn around the corner
And I see your smiling face
I’m tortured by the pain I feel inside

So for now and forever
You will be my only love
‘Cause I can’t imagine anyone
Taking your place

I’m so gone

Caught up in the rapture of you
Your eyes are saying that you want me too
So for you
I’ll hold it back
And let your love shine through
I’m caught up in the rapture of

You can make everything all right
Even make the hardest pain seem so slight
Just as the stars in the sky
Your light shines within me
And makes me feel light
So right

I’m so gone
Caught up in the rapture of you
Your eyes are saying that you want me too
So for you
I’ll hold it back
And let your love shine through

I’m caught up in the rapture of you

P.S. This is a song...if you haven't guessed by now. I'd like to say that Mistletoe Angel gave me the courage to post a song that I've written...so Angel of Mine...Thank you in more ways than you'll ever know for the inspiration. Love always.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2005-04-20 01:50 AM

Oh, yes. I just knew it was a song ~ a beautiful love song! I have posted the lyrics of several of my songs as well.

I have also turned some of the poems that I have posted, into songs!

This was absolutely loverly! ~ and a joy to read! ~ and would be a joy to listen to!

EA

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2005-04-20 04:33 AM

Love in the heart playing a rapturous rhapsody

Hope

freewheelin
Member

since 2005-04-09

Posts 53

3 posted 2005-04-20 09:40 AM

wow, eyes can tell a lot about a person. i wish i can see what you see one day. it sounds very musical and really heartfelt, very nice.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-04-20 11:06 AM

I'm so gone
that's so good! excellent song here!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2005-04-20 07:49 PM

"I can't imagine anyone taking your place."
I know this feeling...James

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2005-04-27 07:57 AM

Oh my....could you see the love for my
Gary inside my heart?? This song sounds
like you could. Thanks for sharing.
Hugs,
Ethel

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

7 posted 2005-04-27 01:26 PM

Excellent!!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2005-04-28 08:30 AM

A beautiful rendering of heart...
The music is eternal.
TD

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2005-04-28 08:36 AM

written with passion....thank you for writing and sharing, and many thanks to Noah as well...

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2005-04-28 09:17 AM

This song smiles through the page. Very lovely!

Love, Margherita

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

11 posted 2005-04-28 01:43 PM

Thank you all so very much for your kind replies. They all bring happiness to my lips with a shy smile. I truly appreciate your kind words.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

12 posted 2005-04-28 04:12 PM

I did guess on the song part - and I like it - it rings in the ears - and I like the passion in its lyrics - much enjoyed-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

13 posted 2005-04-28 04:50 PM

Recognized it as a song right away. Loved it. The message is so pure, true, deep. That is one lucky person to be so completely loved.

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

14 posted 2005-04-29 03:35 PM

Only one word........Beautiful.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

15 posted 2005-05-02 05:26 PM

This is really good. I hope you let the person your talking about know.

As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them.

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

16 posted 2005-10-27 10:23 AM

Beautiful music in more ways then one.

Bravo

Tom

spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

17 posted 2006-08-26 12:07 PM

this is so absolutly beautiful. i will copy it later and hang it.

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

18 posted 2006-08-26 11:58 PM

Thank you so much Spritrider! Your words mean a lot to me!

Yv~Now singing the graces of others' lips....

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