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RMW
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since 2001-03-21

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0 posted 2005-04-19 09:34 AM

An Observation

The moon transitions,
once again bringing benign admiration
to its landscape.
I think of you while touching
the finder lens, careful not to mistake
the subtle variations that transit
for sustained interest. And yet I wonder,
is heaven commonplace
like this
nightly occurrence?

RMW

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-04-19 09:49 AM

a smooth sailing feeling here...subtle, compassionate yet realistic...well done, patience seems most virtued

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-04-19 11:00 AM

As always I am left in awe of your writing ability.
Extremely well written.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

3 posted 2005-04-19 11:32 AM

lovely~~ she says with her raspy voice(cough cough)

sighing
M

Martie

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4 posted 2005-04-19 11:51 AM

Bob

You are a poet!!

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

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california

5 posted 2005-04-19 06:20 PM

very interesting write~
enjoyed~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

RMW
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6 posted 2005-04-19 06:24 PM

Lee, Nancy, M, Martie and MGroves ..... Thank you all. You are much to kind. Bob

passing shadows
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displaced

7 posted 2005-04-19 08:39 PM

quite an observation here

nice write

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

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8 posted 2005-04-20 06:45 AM

Bob,
it is always a pleasure to see your words..to read them and to enjoy the race with which they flow onto the page and into the mind..

bravo sir... bravo

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

9 posted 2005-04-20 08:53 AM

Nothing commonplace
about the heavens,
or your ability
to bring a smile...

Thank you, Robert.

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

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Florida

10 posted 2005-04-20 12:23 PM

"I think of you while touching
the finder lens, careful not to mistake
the subtle variations that transit
for sustained interest"

life supplies the variations for us all.

sometimes that is a good thing and sometimes it is not.

But we learn to cherish what is.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

11 posted 2005-04-20 01:18 PM

Well, for starters, a poem entitled "An Observation" by you, Dear Bob, would most-assuredly grab my attention! I am fascinated by your views of the world we live in.

~ and even if anything were to be generally considered "commonplace", with your words, you have the uncanny ability of making the mundane quite notable!

EA

Transit in Taurus

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12 posted 2005-04-22 01:54 PM

such beautiful words in perfect flow...
I do admire your work.

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