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River Of Dreams
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River Of Dreams |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wanting you Light becomes the brush of dreams Backbend round the moon In torrent running wild beneath my skin Bringing scream its whitened course Full and swelled the waters boil and cool My eyes feather dance your sighs Looking for the fragile places to be tender Making shadows more responsive to the light Surrender lavender to night That my hands suggest the birth of stars Giving wonder in a rescue breath Two lovers drifting on the wrath Making waves rise higher to heaven One desire in the stars conspire Backbend round the moon Light becomes the brush of dreams Wanting you Only you Copyright Kkh 2/19/05 |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"One desire in the stars conspire" Adored that line which fit so beautifully in this flowing stream of magic.  ....jo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is truly a magical write TD! Love, Margherita |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
TD, I can't get these lines out of my head! "Surrender lavender to night That my hands suggest the birth of stars" Oh, the imagery and sensory input! Enjoyed. miscellanea |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
quote: Would you, um, mind if I, um, borrowed a line or two for my next poem?.....there are some in here I really wish I could claim! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
A cool sip of a *sigh*, this - lovely  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
My eyes feather dance your sighs Looking for the fragile places to be tender Making shadows more responsive to the light love that part especially! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Suede Junior Member
since 2003-08-25
Posts 38Drifting on the soul |
This was so beautiful, i had chills! Superb write, even better read! Loved it! Thanks |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
There are no favorite lines within this, only favorite words as an entirety, the poem is superb, so many images, so many feelings, simply grand.... |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Love it! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is such a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
beautiful! Eric |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
 ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
That my hands suggest the birth of stars Giving wonder in a rescue breath Two lovers drifting on the wrath Making waves rise higher to heaven a lovely TD creation, wispy feel behind the veil |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
such dreams fill the night air, caressing the softest breeze carrying them to our waiting eyes ..... sails grasp for such stars!! |
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