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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2005-04-17 11:07 AM

Shower of love

When you are asleep
exploring distant shores
I call upon the stars
to shower you
with silver sparks.
Every single one
is charged
with a whisper of love
born in my heart.
And then I sit
under the disguise
of the night
and watch your smile
diffusing radiance.
Emotions stir the air,
enchanted hours
wrap our souls
in their embrace.
When the stars fade,
dawn’s soft touch
carries a new song.
It’s the echo
of the firmament’s
shower of love.
It’s my voice,
the lingering caress
of the night.
It’s my essence
expanding within you
spilling love and light.

* * *

Love, Margherita

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2005-04-17 11:12 AM

a symphony outpouring from a beautiful
heart.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2005-04-17 11:12 AM

Simply lovely, Margherita!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2005-04-17 11:14 AM

Margherita
You are the breeze that dance my leaves.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

4 posted 2005-04-17 11:22 AM

beautiful and precious as yourself~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2005-04-17 01:23 PM

Love forever spills from thy poetic quill in a most spendiferous manner.

Love & Star Light,

Linda

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

6 posted 2005-04-17 03:34 PM

Nice words

Dave

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

7 posted 2005-04-17 03:42 PM

Absolutely enchanting. I loved reading this poem.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2005-04-17 03:44 PM

very very beautiful thoughts here!!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2005-04-17 11:01 PM

A breathtaking and enchanting write, dear Marguerita.
TD

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2005-04-18 01:52 AM

Thank you all my dear poet friends for your loving comments.
Have a wonderful and creative week!
Love, Margherita

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2005-04-18 12:18 PM

Margherita~

I read this last evening just before retiring for the night ... thank you for the *soft sigh*~

Back now to give you the this one deserves~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email [email protected]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2005-04-18 07:14 PM

And then I sit
under the disguise
of the night
and watch your smile
diffusing radiance.

Aww, a very beautiful love you write~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2005-04-18 07:40 PM

So nice Margherita...James

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

14 posted 2005-04-18 10:33 PM

Lovely word shower here -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

15 posted 2005-04-20 06:21 AM

Thank you too dear Marge, Lory, James and Susan!
Love, Margherita

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

16 posted 2005-04-20 11:25 AM

If it would always be like this, then I'd like to sleep 24 - 7...hehe

Simply lovely

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

17 posted 2005-04-20 02:29 PM

Your words always reach me...in the depth of
who I am.

Love,
Eric

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

18 posted 2005-04-22 08:08 AM

Thank you dear Lee and dear Eric!
Love, Margherita

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

19 posted 2005-04-27 07:54 AM

Beautiful!!! I love your poetry, Sweetie.
Hugs,
Ethel

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

20 posted 2005-04-27 12:38 PM

oh my

how beautiful!

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