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Open Poetry #35

sol sol sol

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2005-04-16 03:22 AM

Sunset
on Pacific waves ~
liquid gold

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-04-16 09:15 AM

This is beautiful Beki!
Lovely lovely...
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-04-16 09:33 AM

nice

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

3 posted 2005-04-16 06:42 PM

Simple, yet elegant. Tu has capturado el sol en una manera muy magnifica. Your title insinuated that you knew Spanish...if this assumption is false...please let me know and I will be more than glad to translate it for you. Believe in this one thing...it's a compliment. Beautiful work.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2005-04-16 06:50 PM

Very nice...James

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

5 posted 2005-04-17 04:52 AM

I have captured the sun in a magnificent way --- yes, I know Spanish and what is great is that I always label my haiku with the first letters of each line which incidentally happen to spell the spanish word for sun....

Thanks everyone..I appreciate all your comments

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