Open Poetry #35 |
Mango Baby |
longte Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199Australia |
Went round to a mates place, just for a few cold beers I was with my partner,his wife and kids were there Usual things are happening, wife breaks out some snacks We’re sitting on the porch, located out the back They’ve got a little baby, not really very tall In fact he cannot walk,,Barely even crawls Just starting to get weaned,, trying out new food Most he just is spitting out, but some he thinks is good Slipped a bit of mango, down onto his tongue From the instant smile we knew that it was YUM Now a mango seed is huge,,, and still has lovely bits So we sat him on the tiles,,, gave him one like this Mango seeds are slippery, like holding mercury Mango seed and Baby,,,, Such a sight to see Co-ordination is not good, in a baby quite so young Trying to get mango seed to meet up with its tongue Little bits of mango are spreading on the floor Babies face is spattered with spreading orange gore Trying to control the seed,,, He needs to find a way Watching babies mind at work to figure out this play The seed is placed in desperation down between his legs Now we see the bobbing and the weaving of his head No,,, That’s never gonna work, lets try another plan Mango seed now firmly gripped by tiny hands Body now extended and lying on the floor Slipping sliding everywhere in all the mango gore Mango seed is gripped, tightly in both arms Face is lowered sucking, leaching out its charms A really happy baby with a grin from ear to ear Ignoring everybody as if we were not there Slurping and a sliding devoured that mango seed Can tell you for a fact… Its what every baby needs The Tree from that seed is now in Full Production in his back yard Live It |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
That was a delightful read, thanks for the |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As delightful a read for me, as it was a thrill for him. Thanks Longte! TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oooo, I like this |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Loved this.Too cute. martyjo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I know mangos...and can just imagine how this worked out. What a lovely uplifting poem to read...thank you! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Fun stuff..... enjoyed -----------ice ><> |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Mango's being my favorite I couldn't resist a peek here and I'm so glad I did. Next time you see the little lad, tell him I still have trouble m'self. Much enjoyed. |
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longte Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199Australia |
Very pleased you all enjoyed it Simple things can be great Thankyou Peter Live It |
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