Open Poetry #35 |
How Can I Get Over this |
Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
My life I walk alone to the own beat of my hearts drum Bashing me into the grown. the cold thankless grown as stones piearce my skin I still go on further digging hopefully to find a star Something to take comfort in me to tell me it's okay sweep my hair away from my face to dry my eyes To shut up my mind make the thoughts stop why can't I stop obessing over you this isnt healthy thing to do But to never see you is like never to the see the sun for I'd be no more without the warmth of your emrbace the sparkle in your eyes. The way you hold me tight at night and how I feel alright inside. How the sickness inside me fades away whenever I'm around you. How can i deal with that going away How can you just walk away how Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Spirit captured a heart Life lost a heart Abd the world deposited debt |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
*tears Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
This hits very close to home with me, stay strong and keep your chin up. Very well expressed, like thoughts from my mind written on your page. Thank you for sharing. Brian Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh, but those typos "crappy: Sometimes it's hard to read past them, to get into the meaning and flow of your thoughts. Even so, your pain and angst are evident. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww! I remember this feeling all too well. |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
Yes your pain and angst are very evident in this poem. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
I know the pain of this to well~ one of my many scars a wound so deep feels like it shall never heal or fade away~ hugs to you~ My spirit will rise |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
thank's guys Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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