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A Tear
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A Tear |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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Shed a tear cause I'm missing you don't know how to see,one day I' with you the next its just me. It gets so pale I don't know what to do I don't know how to deal with to just stop caring for you. Take it slow they say I shall and did you said you never run out on me But here I am alone in the shadows of my own misery and your deception is the only thing that keeps me warm at night. Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is a very heartfelt piece. I think if you would have changed the structure abit...it would have been even better. The last stanza was awesome. hugs, Chris "The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze." |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
ty guys Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I had one of those cold nights last night I understand this |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I know just how you feel. |
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