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ShiningWindHaze
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since 2004-09-06
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California, United States

0 posted 2005-04-14 09:52 PM



Shades of my soul are pumping through nothing -
My heart of dark/shining light beauty.
What is it inside that tells us to love?
Others insides tell them to do what?
Sick and tired of loving
Live angels
I create
The pain by my own over-love

How do I stop the voids?
like to chew and claw away
my eyes
water
surrounds me like the darkest ocean
breathes by violent blood
beats
but I dont move

Tired of moving
Only have to...

Keep moving
down these paths of dark and light
pain and happiness
till nothing eventually finds you
like the nothing I long to feel...
everything beautiful still..
I can't feel it


© Copyright 2005 Byron Keith Landry Jr. - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2005-04-15 02:03 AM


I know this ache
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2005-06-17 11:10 AM


This is a very intense write. Enjoyed!
Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
3 posted 2005-06-17 11:53 AM


A powerful write that pulls at the heart of the reader bringing tears to the eyes...May sunshine heal the pain these words come from...*hugs*

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
4 posted 2005-06-17 12:09 PM


Love is tough.  That's is why I avoid it.  Yet, I seem like I can't write any more love poems...

So maybe life is just tough.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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