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DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2005-04-14 03:49 PM

You kissed me on my knees
Yet stood above me
And like love
My love was above me
You sheltered me that night
Your hair was wet with rain
Your eyes were dark and piercing
I will never love again
Your tongue was harsh and demanding
The lights shone through you vest
You placed over my head
I knew I was second best
The cold you broke within me
The frost in the evening night
I have met many women
But never the warmth of fright
You are so a women
That passes fear into a man
Because the man fears
He fails and that he knows
But with tenderness he can
Endear you to his soul
And give you your sweet love
And in those eyes together
There is no heaven above
A strong women loves
And unfortunately it's true
Too strong a love, but right
Is not for both of you
But in a lighted corner
Two people miles away
Look into each other
And never their minds do stray

ShiningWindHaze
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 138
California, United States

1 posted 2005-04-14 08:51 PM

How can they hold us like that?
Their love and beauty spoken through our tears
Like a forbidden fruit
we still can taste
for a moment and then never again

"two people miles away"

That is my life right now. This poem touched me so... This pain, is both good and bad. It reminds of how real I am... and reminds me of the lies they tell...

- Kaos

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-04-15 02:02 AM

love this Dave

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2005-04-15 02:27 AM

This is a most insightful write. "Two people far away" ... yes, that's exactly right!

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

4 posted 2005-04-15 02:29 AM

good nice i like

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

5 posted 2005-04-15 02:08 PM

ShiningWindHaze

How can they hold us like that?
Their love and beauty spoken through our tears
Like a forbidden fruit
we still can taste
for a moment and then never again

"two people miles away"

That is my life right now. This poem touched me so... This pain, is both good and bad. It reminds of how real I am... and reminds me of the lies they tell...

- Kaos

Some words for Kaos

I echo'd to the world I am me
I swore at the sun I rise
I stood at the foot and said
"life will always arise"

Take care

Dave

passing shadows

love this Dave

Thanks Passing "I can write old romantic but so can you", I am heading for the dark side of the mints.

Dave

Honeybunch
This is a most insightful write. "Two people far away" ... yes, that's exactly right!

Yes - spot on most of liasons.

Thanks for your words.

Dave

Foxyoasis

good nice i like

Pleased you do

Dave

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2005-04-16 07:03 AM

i really liked this dave

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

7 posted 2005-04-16 08:01 AM

Wonderful expressed thoughts and feelings

Hope

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

8 posted 2005-04-17 03:24 PM

Marsha and Hope

Many thanks for the words

Dave

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

9 posted 2005-04-18 12:30 PM

came back again, this time shed a tear
maybe a few, even good memories can be
painfull at times~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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