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VBallNut Member
since 2003-02-12
Posts 60Virginia, USA |
Ridiculous, you say, are the thoughts in my head Who are you to judge the things I have said? Talking, for you, comes easy enough I prefer bottled up, because voicing is tough. Angry, you are, at words I have spoken Harsh when mine are the feelings broken. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a good venting of a bottled-up thought |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Agreeing with Midnitesun. Well done. Chris "The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze." |
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VBallNut Member
since 2003-02-12
Posts 60Virginia, USA |
Thanks for reading & for commenting. It was a late night ranting after an argument so it was definitely written in the heat of the moment. Any title suggestions are appreciated! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds like something I remember well... I've had a few of those arguments myself Maybe you could title it "Bottled Up" |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
A great thought.Yes I have sometimes felt that way too. adagio |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
short and to the point.... I like it. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
One thing we need to remember Dave |
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