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wouldn't you want to breathe.
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wouldn't you want to breathe. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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she could hear the rain outside as she asks if she's really here this is life this is life who was she trying to convince? she could feel herself breathe as autumn seeped through her window and into her lungs she felt like new york she glowed. she feels like kissing a stranger to feel new again because her clothes, her clothes are sewn onto her skin because she's lived in them for so long welcome to your life. if, if she decided to stand beneath a streetlight so you could see her flaws and all would you be the one to cut her clothes off and carry her to summer once more. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
if, if she decided to stand beneath a streetlight so you could see her flaws and all would you be the one to cut her clothes off and carry her to summer once more. ************************* could he/she? would he/she have enough heart to do such for someone in need? good thoughts evoked for me |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
awesome! much enjoyed. Chris "The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed the feeling this one brought |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
Wow, powerful write! Enjoyed this, thanks. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Powerful..I love it. |
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