Open Poetry #35 |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA ![]() |
I came cold, down the stair-escape with eyes low enough to sink the sailing giddy of all those listeners high on his voice I am that low swarming you and I choking in waves Are we crying more outwardly than we imagine? Ordinary sailors ordinary sickness of the wait til next fleshy hold (my hands still sting from the applause) But I find you with them at the exit and the sight of the golden horizon your locks only-dry within the wind fresh sunshine sails upon the sea of heads had me stolen-cargo into the arms of you exqisite young breath in my ear I would like to have told you as you looked at me and shook-paler than before I really did wish you were there next to me in the intimate dark watching his face in the spotlight singing every song that reminds me of you. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
whew...very cool imagery here...enjoyed! enjoyed! ![]() |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
loved it nice Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Fantastic write here Gemma! Very very much enjoy your style.. Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh my, I'm giddy, this is just..god, it's fabulous. WOW! tucking this away into my library for safe keeping. Beautiful write Gem ![]() mxx and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful ending there nice work |
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