Tell Me It Will Be Alright

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Open Poetry #35

Tell Me It Will Be Alright

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-04-13 07:49 PM

Tell me it's alright
it's just crazy notions
upon my mind.

Please tell me you and
I are okay Let me know
that we will be together
forever and a day.

As the rainbow's grace our
presence as the sun set's on
the horizon's my feelings for
you are on going as the sea
as no deeper feelings for you
as I do for thee.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-04-13 09:44 PM

Very nicely said Julie..
just the right touch of ache and longing.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-04-15 02:20 AM

another good one I relate to

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