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Ever meant to say those things,
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Ever meant to say those things, |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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Ever meant to say those things, That come without a meaning- In a long awaited moment souls, shimmering under breathing. You never seemed to notice me even though i stayed in your shadow, In you're eyes are my last words- falling out of reach beneath the skin no emotions could exchange the feeling. Though i know the truth, I've fallen... Looking up at the edge of the world- thoughts falling slowly than myself recollection of the memories, Seeing those that meant so much before- that slipped away before i gave the meaning to those words i'd say. "In heaven i promise our love awaits" I love you more each every day- knowing my heart was broken you always held the other half, Now i fall into dreams of old- never knowing if im dead or gone because you alway linger on. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
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Embryonic words Poems amass in your words To start Something Dave |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I love you more each every day- knowing my heart was broken you always held the other half, Now i fall into dreams of old- never knowing if im dead or gone because you alway linger on." felt this to the bone...wonderful writing  |
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freewheelin Member
since 2005-04-09
Posts 53 |
knowing my heart was broken you always held the other half, really heartfelt and emotional. a very good write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understanding this well |
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