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Something on the Mind |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Sometimes in a man's life something enters Most women would say sense Sense of cooking washing cleaning Being around when needed Sometimes in a woman's life something enters Windows need painting Door needs fixing My car needs a wash Being around when needed Sometimes in a man's life you just get up Most of what you hear makes no sense You cant choose a meal you like You cant cook a meal you like Sometimes in a woman's life you just get up I ache he smells I keep doing meals for him Why wont he eat them Sometimes in a man's life life and life creep up Music no-one knows in his own world Cant hear me, have to go upstairs Isn't doing what's needed Sometimes in a woman's life have I got to remind again I need a man who can talk to the respectable neighbours Not the kids on the street Doesn't he know Sometimes you exist Sometimes you live Sometimes you talk Sometimes You wonder About all |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Sometimes you exist Sometimes you live" exactly....  |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks Sea Dave |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hey Dave You have given us much food for thought with your well written words. I hope all is well with you. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes You wonder About all ~*~ There was a challenge some time back in prose, to write from the opposite point of gender... and it would be a good challenge to revive, just to see how some of us have grown. Good job, Dave. |
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freewheelin Member
since 2005-04-09
Posts 53 |
i can't agree more. its funny how things are sometimes hey? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
one of your best here Dave be proud of it |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I will do a repost of where this nonsense comes from but I'll put all the poems in one bunch. Dave |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
For all the differences opposites still attract - 'tis the law of nature. Good write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Sometimes you exist Sometimes you live Sometimes you talk Sometimes You wonder About all " Exactly Dave!! Excellent write m'friend. Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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ShiningWindHaze Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 138California, United States |
It's interesting the similarities of our thoughts. Sometimes I choose to exist... Sometimes I choose to live. - Kaos |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes very good write~ choosing to just exsist or to really live~ a thought for me to wise up on survival for life sometimes weakens the will and makes you wonder if the fight was worth it, just to exsist, you get so tired, you dont get past that goal. thanks for sharing My spirit will rise |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks all I think you are a bit too kind though Dave |
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