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March of the Renegade
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March of the Renegade |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
In this land where all is well all who live there buy and sell their wares in perfect harmony; they all live in one colony. Unquestioning all follow Law laid out in the Nature’s draw the Code is written with a twist in a scroll of endless X-Y list. In deep dark woods a black bird crows a secret no one but he knows where in the shadows of the night grim soldiers readied for a fight — The Code by all revered - they scorn new order in their image born — they march the march of renegade and turn the land of light to shade. — But little do they have to boast - for in their march they stomped their host — ------------------------------------ In memory of someone close succumbed to cancer in 1990... CG [This message has been edited by CastleGuard (04-13-2005 06:14 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a dedication...wow sad, so sad |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Thank you, passing shadows. I doubt there is anyone who has not been affected by this in one way or another... CG |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
It reminds of a Queen track - '39'. So many lost to cancer for so long. Excellent words. Dave |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Thank you, Dave. I must look up that track... CG |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you. Several moons ago my mother visited me here, in this state, in her physical state... and we knew of the moments that were dear; we made memories even though in our minds? We hoped against hope, all the while knowing the odds were odd, indeed... and she was gone, just a few months later, in '92. Holding you in your memorial time... and thanking you for this part of life. |
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freewheelin Member
since 2005-04-09
Posts 53 |
there's something about this poem that got me, im not sure what it is. maybe it's the last two lines, which i found really powerful, nevertheless, it's a good write. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This aches with sorrow..hugs to you! ~ARH "Let me not to the marriage of true minds |
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