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Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

0 posted 2005-04-13 10:16 AM

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Please love me to-day
Our future is uncertain
Wrap me in your arms
Calm my fears with solemn vows
Kiss me into to-morrow

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Chris Barker
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Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

1 posted 2005-04-13 10:17 AM

Wow! The clarity and honesty in this just takes my breath away! Stunning.

sadie

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

2 posted 2005-04-13 10:28 AM

good one Chris
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-04-13 10:33 AM

Beautiful Chris!!!
This is now my new favourite of yours!!
~Hugs, Love and Miss ya, Teed~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2005-04-13 10:42 AM

Sadie, Bernie & Nancy Lee - thankyou all so much & Hugs!!

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

5 posted 2005-04-13 11:33 AM

This is a lovely charmer about uncertainties we all face, but that you say better! Well done! Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
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6 posted 2005-04-13 12:20 PM

Thankyou Ken for reading and commenting.

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

7 posted 2005-04-13 01:55 PM

Lovely...just lovely.

INclan

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
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8 posted 2005-04-13 02:41 PM

Thankyou INclan. hugs!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2005-04-13 03:07 PM

very touching, yes

day leads into day
so if we love for today and keep loving for just today, we love forever

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

10 posted 2005-04-13 03:49 PM

Thanks Dix !!

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

11 posted 2005-04-13 06:30 PM

Chris, this is spectacular. I loved it, loved it, loved it!

May I share it with my hubby?

Thanks and hugs, Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2005-04-13 07:30 PM

When one opens themselves
so beautifully, so honestly...
the train will travel tracks
it never even knew existed...

Well done, little one.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
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13 posted 2005-04-13 10:02 PM

Marti - you sure can! Thankyou & Hugs!

Karilea - hugs and many thanks sissy!

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