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Spill your grief across the skyline
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Spill your grief across the skyline |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Strangled arms of every tree fall closer to matted dreams dipping in a frenzy for my soiled wishes clogging the skyline of you and I You survived the suffocation of dizzy heights Arms open wide for the world to spit you into recognition just close enough to dusky pink for me to smile at your setting behind the autumn lacklusture that failed to fill me in, fill me content Well I wish I could bend back my own creep like upturned palms to sunlight and never have met you to never have walked in the wind, motionless or heard you test the rain with the icicles of your voice for tasting is wanting all over again . . and you are branches below the cut-off, stooping to the dark with no cure. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
just close enough to dusky pink for me to smile at your setting behind the autumn lacklusture that failed to fill me in, fill me content Well I wish I could bend back my own creep like upturned palms to sunlight and never have met you to never have walked in the wind, motionless or heard you test the rain with the icicles of your voice for tasting is wanting all over again . . and you are branches below the cut-off, stooping to the dark with no cure. ----------------- oh damn this is why I love poetry so.... I read this holding my breath...when I was done I exhaled an "oh my god" .... then I said ...I WISH I HAD WROTE THIS!!!! ya had me from the title on...... amazing write of imagery and angst poetess Gem.... amazing .............. It's only words and words are all I have to take your heart away. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"to never have walked in the wind, motionless or heard you test the rain with the icicles of your voice" way way way too cool gemmagal intensely felt, like freezing raindrops |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
WOW! This is explosive with description. Love it! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome here! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
'Strangled arms of every tree fall closer to matted dreams dipping in a frenzy for my soiled wishes" perfect lines! Well done Gemma! :saqueeze: "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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