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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2005-04-12 10:22 AM

I strain to hear
the sounds of still;

the center, the core
of all that I feel.
I continue pushing past
the fear and the pain

allowing myself
this dance in the rain

that gently cleanses
the hold of this plague
soothing      and calming
the inner rage.

Finding inside
a balance,   a key
that unlocks the door
of my      mystery.

Tap, tap    t a p p i n g
the exterior;
digging deeper
searching for more,

listening quietly
now, and until
silence is heard...

in seek of still.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-04-12 10:35 AM

Ah...

my kind of poem.

From my kind of poet.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2005-04-12 11:21 AM

Beautiful Donna...
TD

adagio
Member

since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

3 posted 2005-04-12 01:15 PM

can't not love it

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2005-04-12 01:57 PM

Donna

Understanding this completely....!

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

5 posted 2005-04-12 04:02 PM

"In seek of still"... I see a blue canvas with a wisp of white. I really like your introspective writing! You write so well with apparent ease.
sadie

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2005-04-12 04:49 PM

good read

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2005-04-12 05:49 PM

oh the inner rage...

I need to find some still too

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2005-05-16 07:02 PM

Finding inside
a balance, a key
that unlocks the door
of my mystery.''''

keep the key close to heart....how beautiful is this?

I came from the mountain
The crust of creation
My whole situtaion-made from clay to stone

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 2005-05-16 07:13 PM

"seeking the still"

love that line Donna

you make me smile big

mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2005-05-16 07:25 PM

How did I miss this lovely?
Well done sweet lady~

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
-Danny Kaye

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2005-05-17 12:24 PM

Enjoyed...James

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2005-05-17 03:54 AM

Then I shall consider myself lucky, being that I am tapped out.

And the stillness is all there is, and not so bad after all~

Hugs, Donna~

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