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startin_fresh Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 137US |
My Thoughts The day is sunny and All should be well with me Great Job, New Car, and Many bills to pay Yet, forever I am plagued By this cloud of ever present Depression cloaking me like A villain waiting to attack. The air is brisk and feels Good to my skin as I warm My face in the glowing sun Yet, I always feel lonely I wonder often if I can Ever break free from the Invisible bonds of the dark Mood that grips me Yes, I want happiness And Joy to be with me Yes, I want to laugh aloud Still happiness eludes me. Be thankful I am told For all that I have I am very much so However, dark clouds linger Nothing hurts more than sitting next to the one you love - knowing it will never be. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I really liked this. I believe that many live in lake effect clouds...where we can't seem to tolerate a good strong rain in order for the low condensation to dissipate. Once it really poured, I found the sun! I really liked this! TD |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoy those moody invigorating storm clouds that make you KNOW you are alive. LOL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understanding this |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Goes with the territory I talked tonight about how I changed when I became professional for open to everyone to anybody then considering me a fool if I tried to be open. They wanted to be told and trying to involve them meant to them I couldn't manage. Not that they didn't care and expected an excuse and money for being there. Welcome to the life of Taylor where the tickbook and clock matter more than ambition and achieving. dave |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Clokes can be taken off when clouds recede. The sun will shine soon, I know it. Nice write. Nice expression of feelings. Kristabell |
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