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Open Poetry #35

lost.

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2005-04-12 01:21 AM

she's laying on her bed
restless
with a beat in her head
and sleep out of reach.

time seems to fly by like her youth
without her approval
does she even notice that tomorrow
she won't be the same
tomorrow is a different person
and a different life.

if she decides to tell you her secrets
would you listen?
because she has alot to say
her dreams, her fears
the person no one knows excists.

once upon a time,
she thought living
through mysterious eyes
was the challenge she's longed for
but life,
life caught up with her.

she was never mysterious,
just lost.

i'm just having
major writters block
nothing has come for a couple days
so i thought i should at least try and
give it a push start

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2005-04-12 07:39 PM

I like your poems. YOu all ways set up the best mood in your poems.

Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-04-13 04:52 PM

Keep pushing

I've had scenarios of books for years and poetry leaks out of me but books are hard work.

dave

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

3 posted 2005-04-13 04:55 PM

This was good! It makes perfect sence. I know the feeling. I seem to fit the catagory. Nice work.

Kristabell

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