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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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a small gathering perplexed perhaps vexed no intrigued and staring at the wall led by a heavenly creature a woman arrayed in business armor or the attire of maybe a teacher it was houndstoothed and pressed right down to her stocking clad calves and up to her so uptight she had discovered upon the wall a shadow or smudge that could if one squinted become the image of a sage or Philosopher so many would try to savor as one might a miracle? as I approached she looked at me with John three sixteen eyes I looked back Matthew twenty-five thirty-one to thirty-six Pity she hadn't seen the shadows of Rwanda if she strains to see perhaps a map of Sudan might appear |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hawke Very impactful! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
in Revelation to us all... (couldn't resist) make me tell you about maps in faces someday...before Botox fills the valleys and the surgeons become Gods--or izzit too late already? sighs and hugs I should sleep.  Thank you for this one, (and with biblical reference I know and understand! yay!)  I sleep. I hope. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
excellent write Reb |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Reb, not only do you provide from what was, but you bring forth thought of what is. And in my personal life, you also opened a new window. Thank you for that. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Pity, indeed... but tunnel vision predominates. *S* Excellent write, my leather feathered friend. *S* SMOOCH!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Learning something "new" everyday...thank you~~ ( and thank you for your kind words)  M |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A very strong poem...form and content __________ice ><> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you made me rummage through my unpacked boxes and bags to find my Bible for this one but dang, was it worth it!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 thump |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
How could I possibly not love this? |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Peace to all... and thanks. I'll be back as soon as I'm done taking care of my Federal and State membership dues -- some of it will undoubtedly do some good somewhere. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very good write~ glad i stopped in~ thanks for sharing~ My spirit will rise |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
its always good to read you...well...lets say thus far its been.... John3:16 eyes....don't know anyone who could use that for a description as well as this it is my goal to have eyes as that, but mine still hold lightning bolts....shrug...its a work in progress.....*s* great write |
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